Loptr Lab · Break the Grid

Mentor / Advisor Review

A guided front door for people who have questions, expertise, or useful friction to bring to the project.

Current altitude: paper-playtest prototype · expert review · not public-release ready

You don't need to know what you are supposed to think.

This page is designed to let your response determine the review path. Choose what you are interested in, what you are willing to examine, or simply where something caught your attention. You can change paths at any time.

The request is not "approve this." We are looking for observations, questions, boundaries, contradictions, and things that should be tested next.

How this review round works

This is paid expert review, not an open-ended volunteer request. Each reviewer will receive a written scope before beginning, including the lane being reviewed, the questions to examine, what evidence or experience is relevant, the expected deliverable, time boundary, compensation, and how the feedback will be used.

First gates: Safety / community care and Accessibility. The accessibility lane should include relevant lived experience where possible; the safety lane should be reviewed by someone qualified to stress-test participatory consent, boundaries, facilitation, and community-care assumptions.

In parallel: Rights / provenance can proceed as document review. Next: Game / system design and Participant / host experience. Then: Replication / facilitation. Last: Claims / evidence.

No reviewer is represented as confirmed until they have explicitly agreed to the scope. Review feedback does not establish endorsement, affiliation, clinical validation, authorship, or permission to use another person's work.

1 · Where do you want to enter?

Your review route

Go to review questions ↓

2 · Before you review

Ask for problems before prescribing solutions. "I got lost here" is useful evidence. "Add X" may be useful later, but first tell us what you observed and why it matters.

3 · Observe → Question → Protect / Change

Use these prompts in whatever order helps. You may answer one, several, or none. This form does not submit data to a server.

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What your review can influence

Feedback does not itself establish endorsement, affiliation, authorship, clinical validation, or permission to use another person's work.

What this project is not

This is an arts-and-engagement prototype. It is not therapy, diagnosis, medical advice, crisis care, or clinical research. Participation is voluntary; reviewers are not being asked to disclose personal health information.

Event-specific operational details remain proposals until independently verified. Review of the event concept is different from operational approval of an event.